Thursday, 19 April 2018

Other students' work



Other students work

The research of the location that the writer has chosen is very detailed due to the facts and statistics of Wollaton Park. They make comments the type of terrain on the park and also the measurements of the space. It also mentions how the Batman film was filmed here which will also make the reader intrigued to visit the park. The writer also mentions that the park is ideal for peaceful walks, or a day out which shows it’s ideal for anybody.

The writer also mentions how the audience feedback was positive for the planning of the website, this therefore shows the quality of the design as the users believe that it is good compared to other professional websites. The writer’s magazine and ancillary was again popular with their target audience. The writer’s research is on Dorset magazines as they wanted to make their magazine similar, to do with travelling and big spaces. This was manifested in their own project due to the fact that they decided to base it around dog walking and Wollaton Park.

The target audience chosen was also very good as they made it very wide for all adults of any age, who are the ones who will have money to buy the magazine, rather than children’s magazines as children are less likely to buy magazines. The weaknesses of the research and planning is that the layout of the magazine looks bland, and could have been made to look more creative and colourful rather than black and white in column.

The final edit of the billboard advertisement overall is very good, due to the fact that it follows all of the conventions of a professional magazine advert. Additionally has a good colour scheme that manifests the theme of the magazine. The advertisement also uses direct address to get the viewer thinking. The advertisement also advertises the website which they have created which is a smart use of promotion. The magazine itself is also very strong due to the fact that the large image of the dog straight away attracts the target audience of animal lovers and dog walkers. The fact that the magazine says ‘The big reveal’ on the front gives the magazine hype, so that the reader wants to see the reveal.



 


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